Love/Shove the verse…?
haven’t posted a verse in a LONG time so here’s one I wrote about a month ago…
God tells me I should be meek and hustle
But the story of my life has been to seek, and stumble
Mad at the world, so that’s why, when I speak I grumble
Constantly lost in these thoughts, so I think and wonder
How can I feel at peace, like, when I sleep or slumber
And keep my spirit strong, so it never weakens, crumbles
And disintegrate to ashes, my legacy will fade
Every mourner that passes is happy I’ve seen the grave
A world of contradiction, when will it ever change?
No longer is composition cool, it’s all about the fame
Yeah I love to flirt with women, but not always bout the brain
What her thoughts is in her mind, is what the reason is I came
Because I have maturity, my peers see me as lame
But I can look into the mirror, see the picture fits the frame
What you reap is what you sow, this is what scripture proclaims
Every bullet has a label, every bullet has a name
Every nigga pulling triggers now, at least that’s what they claim
But when the covers pulled, they left with their reputation stained
So what you gonna do when pressure can’t be contained,
The explosion of emotions overloading on your brain?
that’s as far as I got….
LOVE IT!!! Don’t change a thing. It’s storytelling at it’s best. Remember that what you write is coming from your heart and your soul. If people knew you they would understand that this is YOUR LIFE and YOUR story…no one can change who you are and what you are.
Your rhymes are so literal and powerful and they teach a lesson in a way that isn’t pushing something down someones throat…most people wouldn’t realize the power of positive rhyming.
I think my favorite line is
Because I have maturity, my peers see me as lame
But I can look into the mirror, see the picture fits the frame
What you reap is what you sow, this is what scripture proclaims
It’s you all over…excellent…if only I could express myself in words like that. God has blessed you.
9.2/10
Peace, Love & Happiness
EDIT: I would love to see you and Morbid do a colab
Heya!! Here’s a new song I wrote with my boy Maestro G! Big Thanks to Him for giving me tips on how to sing better! ( SPECIAL THANKS TO DIZZLA D FOR LETTING US USE HIS INSTRUMENTAL )
One of the finest tracks off Tech N9ne’s newest album “KOD!”
Part I: VASILIKOS Greek trad. Arr: A Möller/S Dubé/M Stinnerbom A few verses of a song from the mountainous region of northwestern Greece. “I want to be like a fragrant basil plant in your window. Sneak out on a balcony with your watering can. I wait for you down below.” Part II: DJEF DJEL Music: A Möller Lyrics: M Sene/A Möller Arr: A Möller/S Dubé/M Stinnerbom “What you sow, you must reap – Djef Djel!” A saying from West Africa. A song about how we can live together. Part III: DANCING TUNE Music: A Möller
Performed by IMPURFEKTFAITH
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