You get as much as you put into something.

haven’t posted a verse in a LONG time so here’s one I wrote about a month ago…

God tells me I should be meek and hustle
But the story of my life has been to seek, and stumble
Mad at the world, so that’s why, when I speak I grumble
Constantly lost in these thoughts, so I think and wonder
How can I feel at peace, like, when I sleep or slumber
And keep my spirit strong, so it never weakens, crumbles
And disintegrate to ashes, my legacy will fade
Every mourner that passes is happy I’ve seen the grave
A world of contradiction, when will it ever change?
No longer is composition cool, it’s all about the fame
Yeah I love to flirt with women, but not always bout the brain
What her thoughts is in her mind, is what the reason is I came
Because I have maturity, my peers see me as lame
But I can look into the mirror, see the picture fits the frame
What you reap is what you sow, this is what scripture proclaims
Every bullet has a label, every bullet has a name
Every nigga pulling triggers now, at least that’s what they claim
But when the covers pulled, they left with their reputation stained
So what you gonna do when pressure can’t be contained,
The explosion of emotions overloading on your brain?

that’s as far as I got….

LOVE IT!!! Don’t change a thing. It’s storytelling at it’s best. Remember that what you write is coming from your heart and your soul. If people knew you they would understand that this is YOUR LIFE and YOUR story…no one can change who you are and what you are.
Your rhymes are so literal and powerful and they teach a lesson in a way that isn’t pushing something down someones throat…most people wouldn’t realize the power of positive rhyming.
I think my favorite line is
Because I have maturity, my peers see me as lame
But I can look into the mirror, see the picture fits the frame
What you reap is what you sow, this is what scripture proclaims
It’s you all over…excellent…if only I could express myself in words like that. God has blessed you.
9.2/10
Peace, Love & Happiness
EDIT: I would love to see you and Morbid do a colab

If someone is nasty to you, cheats you out of money, or does something bad to you, even if it’s just through mere words, will they eventually be punished for what they did or said, sometime, while they are still alive? And, will the punishment be severe? Does the Bible talk about that at all, other than saying, "You reap what you sow."?

Evil doers will pay if not in this life they will pay in the next life.

here are mine
Sir, we appear to be surrounded"
"Excellent! Now we can attack in any direction!"

-Anonymous

(Before Marriage)

Boy: Yes! At last. It was so hard to wait.
Girl: Do you want me to leave?
Boy: NO! Don’t even think about it.
Girl: Do you love me?
Boy: Of course! Over and over!
Girl: Have you ever cheated on me?
Boy: NO! Why are you even asking?
Girl: Will you kiss me?
Boy: Every chance I get!
Girl: Will you hit me?
Boy: Are you crazy? I’m not that kind of person!
Girl: Can I trust you?
Boy: Yes…
Girl: Darling!

(After Marriage)

Simply read the above conversation from bottom to top
lets c…
Nothing is more difficult than the art than maneuvering for advantagous positions-Sun-Tzu

politics is war without bloodshed , while war is politics with bloodshed-Mao Tse-Tung

A diplomat must always think twice before saying nothing-Irish proverb

If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh otherwise they’ll kill you-Oscer Wilde

If you cannot convince them confuse them-harry S truman

Giv’em hell

I never cease being dumbfounded buy the thing ppl believe – leo rosten

The penalty for luaghing is six months in jail; if it were not for this penalty the jury would never hear the evidence – H.L. Mencken

When two men in business always agree , one of them is unnecessary-william Wrigly Jr.

Each generation will reap what the former gerneration has sown-chinise proverb

A revolution is a struggle between the past and the future-fidel castro

When we ask for advice,we are usally looking for and accomplice-Marquis de la Grange

Never expose yourself unnecessarily to danger; a miracle may not save you and if it does it will be deducted from your share of luck or merit-Talmud

Never trust a man who speaks well of everybody-john collins

Don’t worry about the world coming to an enf today.It’s already tomorrw in Australia-charles M. schulz

Never make a defence or an apology until you are acused – king charles I

Great you made it threw, if you want more than ask!A COmments? say them and yea….these are some of my favs
oh and also "A good friend is there to bail you out,but a Great friend is there saying"Damn wasn’t that fun?"

aRE WE THERE yEAT

Moral should be preferably ‘As you sow, so shall you reap’ or it may be anything but it should have a moral.
Please explain in detail.

I think you may have worded your question wrong or I’m confused…
"What is the most forgettable of your life"
Most forgettable _______ (missing something here)
And if it’s so forgettable, I probably forgot it.